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My City
In my city,the battle becomes more violent from every side.A fighter imagine that he takes his own,thus he killed every person whom he sees.
And,a blood spreads in his soul before his body without he realize it.

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- In my city,the battle becomes more violent from every side.A fighter imagine that he takes his own,thus he killed every person whom he sees.
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- And,a blood spreads in his soul before his body without he realize it.
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