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  • The Pyramids

  • This is my first topic, so i think there isn't any other topic to talk about better than The Pyramids, as i already live near to it.
  • I'm going to illustrate briefly what makes The Great Pyramid of Giza one of the most astonishing wonders.
  • 1- It consists of 2.3 millions of stone pieces each one is 2-3 tons weight, and this stones had to be transferred from Aswan which is 800 km far away!!!
  • 2- It's 148 m tall, so The Ancient Egyptians had to move those huge stones to this height without cranes. moreover, they put those stones together without an adhesive substance.
  • 3- The Three Pyramids are heading exactly to north, how did they make it? the compass hadn't been invented yet !!!
  • - The list of the wonders goes on , you can search it and I'm sure you'll find it amazing.

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    • This is my first topic, so i think there isn't any other topic to talk about better than The Pyramids, as i already live near to it.
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    • 1- It consists of 2.3 millions of stone pieces each one is 2-3 tons weight, and this stones had to be transferred from Aswan which is 800 km far away!!!
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    • 2- It's 148 m tall, so The Ancient Egyptians had to move those huge stones to this height without cranes. moreover, they put those stones together without an adhesive substance.
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    • 3- The Three Pyramids are heading exactly to north, how did they make it? the compass hadn't been invented yet !!!
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