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My Best friend
Every one have a friends, and i have a lot friends .
Jana is my best friend.
She have a beautiful smile , she is cute and lovely.
She watch the same movie with my every weekend .
She has got a medium and brown hair , green eyes and white skin .
She is so kind and so cute .
She is my best friend and i love her.
it is paragraph for english test can you put the Basics of paragraph please ??

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- My Best friend
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句子 1
- Every one have a friends, and i have a lot friends .
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句子 2
- Jana is my best friend.
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句子 3
- She have a beautiful smile , she is cute and lovely.
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句子 4
- She watch the same movie with my every weekend .
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句子 5
- She has got a medium and brown hair , green eyes and white skin .
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- She is so kind and so cute .
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- She is my best friend and i love her.
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句子 8
- it is paragraph for english test can you put the Basics of paragraph please ??
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8