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從anna-an來的文本 - English

  • My first travel

  • When I was 10 years old me and my family went to Ukraine .
  • We went to Kiev tha capital of Ukraine.
  • We were living in the apartment which we rent beforehand .
  • We were living on the 11th floor .
  • It so happened that the day of independence was coming .
  • The day of independence we went to the center of the city .
  • Kiev is a very beautiful city .
  • I admired with beautiful buildings and streets .
  • We had a good time .
  • I can never forget that day .

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