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My first experience in England
I though my adapt to new life went to be different but it's being very difficult.
Yesterday, when I arrived to the airport, I went to take the bus but it wasn't available so it was full.
Then, I had change my route.
I asked people the way arrive to home.
Finally, I got it.
Today, I have got up and I miss my friends,my family,my city...
I feel sad but I have to be strong and fight for my dream which is improve my English and work.
I love this country.

Judul
- My first experience in England
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Judul
Kalimat 1
- I though my adapt to new life went to be different but it's being very difficult.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 1
Kalimat 2
- Yesterday, when I arrived to the airport, I went to take the bus but it wasn't available so it was full.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 2
Kalimat 3
- Then, I had change my route.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 3
Kalimat 4
- I asked people the way arrive to home.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 4
Kalimat 5
- Finally, I got it.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 5
Kalimat 6
- Today, I have got up and I miss my friends,my family,my city...
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 6
Kalimat 7
- I feel sad but I have to be strong and fight for my dream which is improve my English and work.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 7
Kalimat 8
- I love this country.
  Pilih sekarang juga!
- TAMBAHKAN KOREKSI YANG BARU! - Kalimat 8