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My little me
Hi, my name is Maira.
I'm 17 years old and live in Argentina.
My dream is travel of the world and studying psychology and photography.
I love listening to music all day.
I have a chicken (Cota), a dog (Luna), and a cat (Juana).
This is my little history read at 5 am.

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标题
- My little me
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hi, my name is Maira.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I'm 17 years old and live in Argentina.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- My dream is travel of the world and studying psychology and photography.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I love listening to music all day.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I have a chicken (Cota), a dog (Luna), and a cat (Juana).
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- This is my little history read at 5 am.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6