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Hi guys !
I would like to become aupair in a English country, do you have some contact to help me?
Actually, i just want to go in Australia, USA or England to learn english, if you have some contact or job to suggest me, please send me a message. Thank you

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- I would like to become aupair in a English country, do you have some contact to help me?
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- Actually, i just want to go in Australia, USA or England to learn english, if you have some contact or job to suggest me, please send me a message. Thank you
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