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  • Rational Essay VOL1

  • Three years ago, I find an opportunity in our guide for the university.
  • It was ESCSUNY program and deserves two diplomas for the students.I enrolled the program in the 2012-2013 term.
  • I had been waiting to take my ESC courses for three years.Finally, I started to take my first courses in this term.
  • There are a few reasons about why I choose the ESC studies.
  • Firstly, my family impresses my thoughts about my future plans.
  • My father encouraged me to be part of this program.
  • He has a car rental company and I worked with him.
  • Managing, marketing caught my attention.
  • I thought I should be in the business world.
  • I searched about ESC and it meets my request.
  • There are international opportunities which can expand my vision and improve my skills.
  • So, ESC is one of the stairs to achieve my goals.
  • After I started ESC SUNY, I realized that learning together with people from different parts of the world is a satisfying experience, thanks to interactive learning.
  • I took 6 lessons from ESC until that time.
  • These include Communication for success, Global Climate Change, Science and Technology in Western Culture, ICCM, Ethics for Global Economy, Global Strategies.
  • These lessons primarily helped me to acquire new cultures from my new people.
  • For example, in the ICCM class, we had group assignments and gave us the chance to work with an international group.
  • In Ethics, I learned how to judge the wrong, the good and the bad, and the resolutions for dilemmas.
  • I was a global awareness with Global Climate Change and I am part of a project to block it.
  • Everything I learned is aware that you take me one step further and constantly learning new things in different areas increases my self-confidence.
  • I hope that when I have completed all my courses, I will be equipped with quality materials such as Natural Science, American History, Western Civilization, Humanities, and Social Science together with Anadolu University.
  • These will fill important gaps in my career because as a company, to expand and to be more productive, they need employment who is well informed about the international environment.
  • It also will add some value to our the way of thinking.
  • In addition, there will be thousands of people who graduated from a university with me.
  • Therefore, it is like a competition.
  • I should be well supported.
  • Two diplomas will get ahead me from others.

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