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  • my first job!!

  • I´m very happy today because I manage to find a job so it´s great because now I can earn any money to spend a bit and saving a part of it too.to get it 60 people were interested and anoted in order to try to obtain the post,all of us made the test and only twuelve going to be selected and I was one of them! thank god!

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    • I´m very happy today because I manage to find a job so it´s great because now I can earn any money to spend a bit and saving a part of it too.to get it 60 people were interested and anoted in order to try to obtain the post,all of us made the test and only twuelve going to be selected and I was one of them! thank god!
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