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從Natalia_indonative來的文本 - English

  • My first friend

  • This is my fist time I live so far from my parents.
  • I have been staying at Jakarta about one year more.
  • I had found my best friend, and she always supported me when I have been here.
  • But now she has left a few months ago, she got a new job in other city.
  • I am sad, but I have to be better after I met her.
  • Because she gave me many inspiration.

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