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  • An US travel

  • The largest travel that I have ever done it has been to US to visit a friend a couple of years ago.
  • I went to New York where my friend live and we have spent together almost two months.
  • There, I had the opportunity of visiting different famous place such as the Empire state building, Manhattan or Statue of Liberty among another place and monuments.
  • I also had the opportunity of take a ride on a cruise ship and it was fantastic because I have never done it.
  • Moreover, people who I met there were very kind and they all treated me so friendly, despite of American culture is not as Spanish culture.
  • If I have the another opportunity to return to US I will do it without doubt though it’s truth that the price of fight is expensive and it takes you many hours but the experience is great.

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    • There, I had the opportunity of visiting different famous place such as the Empire state building, Manhattan or Statue of Liberty among another place and monuments.
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    • Moreover, people who I met there were very kind and they all treated me so friendly, despite of American culture is not as Spanish culture.
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    • If I have the another opportunity to return to US I will do it without doubt though it’s truth that the price of fight is expensive and it takes you many hours but the experience is great.
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