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The City of Dream
The name of our city is "The City of Dream" because it is simply perfect.
It is located in south of Europe.
Our city is characterized for being a large city because it haves with 5000 habitants.
Our type of government is an incredibly egalitarian and just republic.
Also, our have a wonderful mayoress who cares about every citizens and has a firm hand to corruption.
Her name is Rouse Clinton.
The most part of our city are women.
This is why, the political party preferent is "Women to power".

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- The name of our city is "The City of Dream" because it is simply perfect.
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- It is located in south of Europe.
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- Our city is characterized for being a large city because it haves with 5000 habitants.
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- Our type of government is an incredibly egalitarian and just republic.
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- Also, our have a wonderful mayoress who cares about every citizens and has a firm hand to corruption.
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- Her name is Rouse Clinton.
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- The most part of our city are women.
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- This is why, the political party preferent is "Women to power".
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