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The cell phone
I think cell phone is necessary in our life because is a big media of communication and of leisure.
The most person have a cell phone and it is used for speak with friends, family or in the work.
Also, the cellphone have news of the our country and the world inmediately.

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- I think cell phone is necessary in our life because is a big media of communication and of leisure.
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- The most person have a cell phone and it is used for speak with friends, family or in the work.
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- Also, the cellphone have news of the our country and the world inmediately.
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