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Just London !
Hi!
I'm french!I would like to discover England because I'm only went to the cost and only one day.
And notably London !

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请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English

标题
- Just London !
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hi!
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I'm french!I would like to discover England because I'm only went to the cost and only one day.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- And notably London !
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3