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Describing some actions in English
Today I dropped my wife off at her mom's house to spend a little time with her.
I picked up my motorcycle key and after that I got on my bike and started it.
Meanwhile my wife was opening the gates.
Afterwards I left the garage and waited for her to lock the gates.
Then she got on my bike and we left.
It was a roush hour but as I was by bike it was okay because it doesn't take long to get there by bike.
When we got to her mom's house we got off my bike and we called her.
She came and opened the gates.
I spent some time there and left.
On my way home I passed over some speed bumps and whenever I did I slowed down so I wouldn't damage my bike.

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- Describing some actions in English
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句子 1
- Today I dropped my wife off at her mom's house to spend a little time with her.
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句子 2
- I picked up my motorcycle key and after that I got on my bike and started it.
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句子 3
- Meanwhile my wife was opening the gates.
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句子 4
- Afterwards I left the garage and waited for her to lock the gates.
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句子 5
- Then she got on my bike and we left.
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句子 6
- It was a roush hour but as I was by bike it was okay because it doesn't take long to get there by bike.
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句子 7
- When we got to her mom's house we got off my bike and we called her.
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句子 8
- She came and opened the gates.
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句子 9
- I spent some time there and left.
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句子 10
- On my way home I passed over some speed bumps and whenever I did I slowed down so I wouldn't damage my bike.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 10