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  • So sometimes it feels so peaceful so you can look and watch something.I sit down and watch the metro passing as if I feel like I'm resting at such times.The slow or fast movements of people, the unconcerned, anxious, empty eyes make another sense to me.While I was sitting there watching the people who were running at that stall, thousands of thoughts flow from my heart and my mind.And when I feel like this, I find peace of mind that I can do stranger treatment to my self and everyone.Because at that moment nothing else belongs to me except when the running times (the times flows??)

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    • So sometimes it feels so peaceful so you can look and watch something.I sit down and watch the metro passing as if I feel like I'm resting at such times.The slow or fast movements of people, the unconcerned, anxious, empty eyes make another sense to me.While I was sitting there watching the people who were running at that stall, thousands of thoughts flow from my heart and my mind.And when I feel like this, I find peace of mind that I can do stranger treatment to my self and everyone.Because at that moment nothing else belongs to me except when the running times (the times flows??)
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