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  • Science and Technology The reason for picking no war in my utopia is because I know what real war is and how it can destroy you mentally and physically.
  • Instead of trying to make a bomb, scientist and robots will help the people instead of killing them.
  • Technology is a big part of my society, it is something that influences the way society works and helps the people of ‘The secret of the cities’ in their daily lives.
  • Technology brings in my utopia things like: - transportation with high-tech cars, trains and spaceships - better education resources, like you can see in my trailer - and living condition, like high-tech buildings and houses My utopia would encourage scientific research in all fields but not in all the cities.
  • Only robots and adults (in adult city) can do scientific research.
  • There will be so much different energy sources like solar energy, kinetic energy,..

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    • Science and Technology The reason for picking no war in my utopia is because I know what real war is and how it can destroy you mentally and physically.
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    • Technology is a big part of my society, it is something that influences the way society works and helps the people of ‘The secret of the cities’ in their daily lives.
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    • Technology brings in my utopia things like: - transportation with high-tech cars, trains and spaceships - better education resources, like you can see in my trailer - and living condition, like high-tech buildings and houses My utopia would encourage scientific research in all fields but not in all the cities.
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