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Health
Health is very important for all people, but sometimes many people forgot about their health.
Because some people get sick.
Please , take care of your health.

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句子 1
- Health is very important for all people, but sometimes many people forgot about their health.
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句子 2
- Because some people get sick.
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句子 3
- Please , take care of your health.
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