批改

现在就来帮忙修正吧！裸眼

從Rahma007來的文本 - English

原始版本
更正后的版本。

I need some help
Hello everyone, My name is Rahma.
I'm new on this site and I need improve my english and more practice with any new friend, so, if you can help me, I will be thankful

Rahma007February 2017100% GOOD (1 votes)
- 举报为垃圾信息？

请帮忙修正每一个句子 - English

标题
- I need some help
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 标题
句子 1
- Hello everyone, My name is Rahma.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I'm new on this site and I need improve my english and more practice with any new friend, so, if you can help me, I will be thankful
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2