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  • WHEN EDUCATION IS A FAMILY BUSINESS

  • The purpose of this report is to summarise the pros and cons of educating children at home.
  • In this day and age there are some families who prefer to be schooled at home.
  • This tendency is growing.
  • - Highlighting arguments in favour There are some reasons for these parents for instance: they prefer a suitable boyhood for their children without pressure as an adult; the more involved they are, the closer they feel; they do not believe in curriculum, syllabus and public exams.
  • As a result nowadays a lot of British children study at home.
  • - Arguments against The main drawback that we could find is social skills and interpersonal relationships.
  • These days we need some special abilities that there are not in the books.
  • In addition knowledge’s parents is limited about certain subjects and areas such as science, maths… Conclusion As you can see there are pros and cons in both cases.
  • But all these things considered I firmly believe that children must be educated at school, where they are among classmates and they are tutored by professionals.
  • Nevertheless the school should be more childhood friendly.

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    • - Highlighting arguments in favour There are some reasons for these parents for instance: they prefer a suitable boyhood for their children without pressure as an adult; the more involved they are, the closer they feel; they do not believe in curriculum, syllabus and public exams.
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    • - Arguments against The main drawback that we could find is social skills and interpersonal relationships.
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    • In addition knowledge’s parents is limited about certain subjects and areas such as science, maths… Conclusion As you can see there are pros and cons in both cases.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • But all these things considered I firmly believe that children must be educated at school, where they are among classmates and they are tutored by professionals.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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