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Goog afternooon mr / mrs, Let's introduce myself.

My name is ***.

I am ** years old and i have two brothers.

I am fond of languages and sports: I practice bike, sailing and running.

My first passion is politics.

I enjoy being aware of politics news and i'm engaged since 2 years in a political party.

I like helping others and participate in collective projects.

During this year, I'm engaged with 20 other students in an associative project.

Our goal is to raise *** € in order to build a school in Cambodge and to renovate another school in Laos, with 2 associations : "Enfants du Mékong" and "Pour un Sourire d'enfant".

I know since many years I would like to study law and I love learning new languages.

Thus, my professional project is to work in international relationships or in international law.

That's why I apply to this formation of european law and I am sure that it will satisfy me perfectly.

Is it a good presentation for a university interview?

Please can you add that lack or if you have any proposition?