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  • Luxury Hotel

  • I think that the best option to spend holiday is the choice of a luxury hotel, because the Holiday is the time of rest and lose touch with the reality, that’s why I would be choose this option for my vacation.
  • The first advantage is that I don’t have toil at cooking which sometimes I have enough.
  • Breakfast is included in the price, and lunch Or dinner without any problem I can buy in the restaurant.
  • Besides in every room is bathroom from which I can use as much as and when I want, while in campsite often hasn’t even general bathroom and if they are to use by all of the campers, what for me isn’t comfortable, because I like take a show er Or brush teeth without haste.
  • Another plus of a luxury hotel for me is that when is rain, storm or when is cold night In hotel I have provided comfort away from under the circumstance.
  • For sure for me the hotel is better than others option.

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    • I think that the best option to spend holiday is the choice of a luxury hotel, because the Holiday is the time of rest and lose touch with the reality, that’s why I would be choose this option for my vacation.
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    • Besides in every room is bathroom from which I can use as much as and when I want, while in campsite often hasn’t even general bathroom and if they are to use by all of the campers, what for me isn’t comfortable, because I like take a show er Or brush teeth without haste.
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    • Another plus of a luxury hotel for me is that when is rain, storm or when is cold night In hotel I have provided comfort away from under the circumstance.
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