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make friends everywhere
hello, i am Olivia. i want to improve my English speaking and make friends everywhere. i can teach you Mandarin and cantonese as reward.
Skype: mrs928@qq.com wechat: OliviaMok

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- make friends everywhere
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句子 1
- hello, i am Olivia. i want to improve my English speaking and make friends everywhere. i can teach you Mandarin and cantonese as reward.
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- Skype: mrs928@qq.com wechat: OliviaMok
  赶紧投票吧！
- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2