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Hello everyone!
My name's Rosanna and I'm 17.
I'd like to improve my English because I like travel and one day I'd like to live abroad.
English is most important for speak with anyone in the world and if you like travel you have to know it.
I attend a beautician academy and my teacher of English is not bad but i think that i can learn more with some exercise. :)

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- My name's Rosanna and I'm 17.
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- I'd like to improve my English because I like travel and one day I'd like to live abroad.
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- English is most important for speak with anyone in the world and if you like travel you have to know it.
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- I attend a beautician academy and my teacher of English is not bad but i think that i can learn more with some exercise. :)
  투표하세요!
- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 4