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  • my sixth day!

  • good afternoon,today i did a test at university.At this time it's very hot in senegal.Tonight my friend cath will leave to England,i'm a bit sad but i belive that she will come back another year,and before we wiil change some message on skype or facebook.To night i will also go to DAARA J concert.they are my favourite singers.I love them!!!!

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    • good afternoon,today i did a test at university.At this time it's very hot in senegal.Tonight my friend cath will leave to England,i'm a bit sad but i belive that she will come back another year,and before we wiil change some message on skype or facebook.To night i will also go to DAARA J concert.they are my favourite singers.I love them!!!!
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