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  • Sales

  • The line graph compares the sales of three bakery’s products during the year 2014.
  • At the first trimester of 2014, bread sales experience a high dip to reach form 80 000 $ to about 40 000 $.
  • After that, bread sales alternate steeply dips and growths until the month of October.
  • From then on, bread sales increase to reach again the highest proportion of benefits, a total of 80 000 $.
  • Buns sales rise steeply before reaching a peak from the month of May until September.
  • From then on, bun sales experience a constant downward trend to a low of 30 000 $ of benefits.
  • In spite of being the less popular bakery item, Pies sales rise constantly from 10 000 $ to reach 20 000 $ in august.
  • This proportion of sales stays stable during three months.
  • From October to December, the sales of pies rise suddenly to 40 000 $.

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