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I believe that zoos are nesessary.
They help to save endangered animals.
There nobody can kill any animal species.
Zoo workers take care about animals, feed them and treat.
But I think that zoos should to change.
From my point of view zoos must be placed in the forests, valleys, steppes and other animals habitat.
Because it is so sad to see how bear walk on concrete, but not on the grass.
Animals must to feel free.
They need more place, plants and our care!

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문장 1
- I believe that zoos are nesessary.
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문장 2
- They help to save endangered animals.
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문장 3
- There nobody can kill any animal species.
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문장 4
- Zoo workers take care about animals, feed them and treat.
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문장 5
- But I think that zoos should to change.
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문장 6
- From my point of view zoos must be placed in the forests, valleys, steppes and other animals habitat.
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문장 7
- Because it is so sad to see how bear walk on concrete, but not on the grass.
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문장 8
- Animals must to feel free.
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문장 9
- They need more place, plants and our care!
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- ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - 문장 9