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  • PROS AND CONS OF INTERNET TO YOUNG PEOPLE

  • The purpose of this essay is to analyse pros and cons the internet has brought to youth nowadays.
  • It is well-known that internet is necessary in our homes, jobs even in our hobbies and leisure.
  • Nevertheless, this sort of tool is difficult to manage.
  • In this day and age, there are certain advantages to using internet.
  • For instance: you can have access to something everywhere easily, just you need a connection.
  • That is why, young people can do homework, surfing the internet and share information immediately; above all, they can be in touch with their friends always.
  • On the contrary, there are certainly some drawbacks to internet.
  • Some survey points out that most young people have some kind of addiction to internet, because is hard to stop and come back to real life.
  • Furthermore, the more online friends they have, the less close friends they have.
  • Recent studies claim that people lose the skill to recognize facial expressions and the interpersonal relationship abilities.
  • In addition, there are a lot of websites, blogs and tools needless.
  • As you can see there are pros and cons in both cases.
  • It leads me to think that internet is not good or bad.
  • One must be careful about the use of internet.

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