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I want to learn English, cause I want in CA.
I want to see LA and popular stars there.
It is a shiny state and I can swim in the sea, when I want it.
I have to learn English, if I want study in USA or Canada or UK

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句子 1
- I want to learn English, cause I want in CA.
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句子 2
- I want to see LA and popular stars there.
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句子 3
- It is a shiny state and I can swim in the sea, when I want it.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I have to learn English, if I want study in USA or Canada or UK
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4