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  • One Central Park, Jean Nouvel

  • One Central Park is a set of 2 towers in Chippendale, a Syndey’s district.
  • This project was directed by Jean Nouvel and is a part of an urban renovation.
  • One of two towers is 64.5 m tall and have 12 stages of inhabitations.
  • The second one, a 166-meters-tall tower, with 34 stages, now dominates the district around the city’s Central Station.
  • The environmental aspect of the building doesn’t stop at its several green spaces.
  • Indeed, the project was designed according to rigorous standards of respectful of the environment and sustainable construction.
  • The green creeping up the façades was designed by Jean Nouvel's long-time collaborator, the botanist and artist Patrick Blanc.
  • It is the world’s tallest green wall.
  • It acts as a natural solar control changing with the seasons.
  • Indeed, it protects the apartments of the direct solar light during summer while maintaining a maximum of sun in winter.
  • The Australian rating system for green building, Green Star, awarded it 5 stars out of a maximum of 6, that’s to say a level of national excellence.
  • The recycling of materials from the demolition of the former building, the treatment of rainwater and it re-use, the thermal and acoustic insulation are all elements that have been treated with care to allow this building to excel in its category.
  • Its extravagant cantilever is conceived as a mechanism for reflecting sunlight back down into a raised garden space, in the shade of the tower.
  • It shelters a common room and a panoramic terrace.
  • It is illuminated at night with a device created by the French artist Yann Kersalé.
  • This barrage of reflecting lights and mirrors echoes of the architect’s One New Change in London.

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    • The second one, a 166-meters-tall tower, with 34 stages, now dominates the district around the city’s Central Station.
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    • Indeed, the project was designed according to rigorous standards of respectful of the environment and sustainable construction.
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    • The green creeping up the façades was designed by Jean Nouvel's long-time collaborator, the botanist and artist Patrick Blanc.
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    • Indeed, it protects the apartments of the direct solar light during summer while maintaining a maximum of sun in winter.
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    • The Australian rating system for green building, Green Star, awarded it 5 stars out of a maximum of 6, that’s to say a level of national excellence.
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    • The recycling of materials from the demolition of the former building, the treatment of rainwater and it re-use, the thermal and acoustic insulation are all elements that have been treated with care to allow this building to excel in its category.
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    • Its extravagant cantilever is conceived as a mechanism for reflecting sunlight back down into a raised garden space, in the shade of the tower.
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