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  • Presentation

  • Hi everybody, My name's Laure.
  • I'm from France, in Montpellier.
  • I'm here to improve my english.
  • I'm a student in a BBA - Bachelor of business Administration. I'm 18.
  • I can help too if somebody wants improve his french. :) Bye !

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