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  • Cover letter

  • Dear Sir or Madam, First year studient at the engineer school called ESIEA, in Laval, I am writing to you to apply for the japanese travel during the next summer.
  • Indeed, I began learning japanese in 2016, and I had clicked for the language.
  • That’s why travelling in Japan is an opportunity not to be missed.
  • On the one side, because it would allow me to involve my japanese skills, thanks to the complete immersion, which is the best way to learn.
  • On the other side, it would allow me to discover and enjoy the japanese’s culture, and I’m really conviced that I can learn a lot from.
  • In my humble opinion, I could also bring something to my hostes, through the french culture.
  • This is exactly what is rewarding : the mutual exchange that this summer trip offers.
  • Moreover, I’m an open-minded person, I know how to get used to any circumstances, as I did many times in my international travels.
  • I had the chance to be welcomed in Spain, in England and in the Netherlands by natives families, and those trips were the most rewarding experiences I have ever made.
  • I really wish reproduce this kind of experience, especially in atypical country like Japan.
  • In my work, I’m diligent and meticulous, because I always want to give the best of me.
  • Therefore, whatever the kind of job, i will give me the means to the expectations of the company.
  • Thanks to my experience as a firewoman, I am easy to get on with, which is a major advantage in the jobs that I may do.
  • As seeing the cultural enrichment and the linguistic progression, I make a point of honour to go to Japan in the summer.
  • I am available for any complementary informations, and I thank you in advance, for your consideration.
  • Sincerely,

Xin hãy chỉnh sửa từng câu giúp tôi! - English

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    • Dear Sir or Madam, First year studient at the engineer school called ESIEA, in Laval, I am writing to you to apply for the japanese travel during the next summer.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • On the one side, because it would allow me to involve my japanese skills, thanks to the complete immersion, which is the best way to learn.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • On the other side, it would allow me to discover and enjoy the japanese’s culture, and I’m really conviced that I can learn a lot from.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Moreover, I’m an open-minded person, I know how to get used to any circumstances, as I did many times in my international travels.
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    • I had the chance to be welcomed in Spain, in England and in the Netherlands by natives families, and those trips were the most rewarding experiences I have ever made.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • Thanks to my experience as a firewoman, I am easy to get on with, which is a major advantage in the jobs that I may do.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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    • As seeing the cultural enrichment and the linguistic progression, I make a point of honour to go to Japan in the summer.
      Bầu chọn ngay!
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