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  • Check my opinion essay

  • Friendship is one of the most important thing in human life.
  • Some people suppose that making friends is as not as hard as keeping them.
  • Others,however, believe that maintaining friendship is much more difficult.
  • So ,who is right?
  • In my opinion, making friends with people is easier for anyone in the world.
  • Firstly, you do not know your friend-to-be at all and you both have seen each other for the first time.
  • You expect each other to be the most unique person on Earth so you both are one hundred percent ready to make a new friend.
  • Seсondly, keeping friends takes more efforts and time.
  • You must partly dedicate yourself to your life mate in any case.
  • Only mutual support and dedication can save your friendship.
  • However,there are people who think that keeping friends is easier than making them because you both have something that unites you:mutual interests, secrets or aims.
  • I do not agree with these people as you both must be reasonable enough to continue friendship.
  • Being reasonable is a harder thing than anything else we know.
  • In conclusion I would like to say that you may have some difficulties making friends, but in general it is easier than keeping them

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