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Why I want to study English?
Hi!
My name is Halyna. I am 31.
I am in maternity leavenow and that's why I have many time to improve my English.
Why I want to study this language?
First of all English is a language if international communication.
Also I need English in my job.
I work as an export-import manager and I need English to communicate with our foreign customers.
I hope this site will help me to improve my English.

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- Hi!
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- My name is Halyna. I am 31.
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- I am in maternity leavenow and that's why I have many time to improve my English.
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- Why I want to study this language?
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- First of all English is a language if international communication.
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- Also I need English in my job.
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- I work as an export-import manager and I need English to communicate with our foreign customers.
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- I hope this site will help me to improve my English.
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