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從fajo來的文本 - English

I'm raving
I'm raving tonight and I'm deciding to write some sentences.
I ask to myself : nowadays people are rude or it's us who age ?
I remember me of my chilhood.
I think it's the best part of my life because I live with a clear mind and playing the whole day with my friends and brothers.
I hasn't got the adult troubles.
It was truly the real and simple life, with lightness.
More the age keeps come, more we have to be carefully that we say, we do.
It's disappointed when we think about that.
We must keep the door opened for the dreams, the unexpected that make our life spiced.

标题
- I'm raving
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句子 1
- I'm raving tonight and I'm deciding to write some sentences.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I ask to myself : nowadays people are rude or it's us who age ?
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I remember me of my chilhood.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3
句子 4
- I think it's the best part of my life because I live with a clear mind and playing the whole day with my friends and brothers.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 4
句子 5
- I hasn't got the adult troubles.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 5
句子 6
- It was truly the real and simple life, with lightness.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 6
句子 7
- More the age keeps come, more we have to be carefully that we say, we do.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 7
句子 8
- It's disappointed when we think about that.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 8
句子 9
- We must keep the door opened for the dreams, the unexpected that make our life spiced.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 9