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Text from ChristianFernando - English

  • The mysterius woman number 1

  • A lot of days ago, I was wolking around the city, for one central park´s pavement road on cobblestones.
  • And there, I met woman.
  • She had black hair, it was very dark, her eyes was ice blue and her skin was white as ivory, of of drew eyerbrows and thin hands.
  • She was the very beautiful woman that i did saw in my life. she´s mythical but true.
  • She told me of her life and her inland world.
  • Her name is Alissa.
  • She is 21 years old, her parent´s names are Marcus and Lucianna.
  • They are from england, but Alissa was born at he montains to North America.
  • But into her montains she reads a lot of books.
  • In the books, she studied literature, famous characters such as Davinci, Paganini, Beethoven, Shakespeare etc. In her house she studied history.
  • Her father and mother, she told me, that they were or are much stricts aht she, and austere at the people.
  • Her parents intrusted Alissa´s education.
  • Her favorite music is rock, sympphonyc metal and heavy metal.
  • She´s liked the literature with social criticism.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English