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Rain
Actually i have one plan with my friends today.
Karin, Sarah and I want to going to a restaurant.
We have planning it for a long time ago.
We agreed to leave at 3 p.m.
I really excited today, even I can taste a pizza in my mouth, U~~~ so yummy.
At 2 p.m the rain so hard and i text Karin.
" Are we going to a restaurant today?
But rain is so hard at here", Karin prefer to stay home because her house is rained too.
Only Sarah's house that isn't rained.
But she says we can go to the reastaurant other time.
Oh i feel so dissaponted right now.

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- Actually i have one plan with my friends today.
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句子 2
- Karin, Sarah and I want to going to a restaurant.
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- We have planning it for a long time ago.
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- We agreed to leave at 3 p.m.
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- I really excited today, even I can taste a pizza in my mouth, U~~~ so yummy.
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- At 2 p.m the rain so hard and i text Karin.
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- " Are we going to a restaurant today?
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- But rain is so hard at here", Karin prefer to stay home because her house is rained too.
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- Only Sarah's house that isn't rained.
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- But she says we can go to the reastaurant other time.
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- Oh i feel so dissaponted right now.
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