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Testo da Embing - English

  • My Family

  • My family have 5 persons.
  • First is my father, He is Javaness, He likes to repairs something wrong like motorcycle or the roof, He likes to find new experinece and He likes to backpacker since He was kid.
  • Second is my mom, She is Javaness, She likes to cooks delicious food ( especially fish with balado sauce ), She is kindly person and always advise me if i do something wrong, She likes to drink hot coffe every morning while reading newspaper.
  • Third is my elder brother, He is very patient person, i always joke on him but he doesn't angry to me, now He on going his study at college and i missed him.
  • Fourth is my elder sister, She is good in public speaking ( and i want too ),She has many friends, She likes seafood and now She is on going at college (She likes tourism so She is study about that).
  • The last is me, I like backpacker , I like to feel new experience, I like to study many language and want to be a polyglot, my hobby is reading comics or novel and I like drawing too, I love cats so much ( Last year I have white grey cat but He is missing until now..His name is Ariel..Oh I really missed him), I loved to gathering with my friends ( my father said that friendship must be endless).

PER FAVORE, AIUTA A CORREGGERE OGNI FRASE! - English

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  • Frase 2
    • First is my father, He is Javaness, He likes to repairs something wrong like motorcycle or the roof, He likes to find new experinece and He likes to backpacker since He was kid.
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 2AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 2
  • Frase 3
    • Second is my mom, She is Javaness, She likes to cooks delicious food ( especially fish with balado sauce ), She is kindly person and always advise me if i do something wrong, She likes to drink hot coffe every morning while reading newspaper.
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 3AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 3
  • Frase 4
    • Third is my elder brother, He is very patient person, i always joke on him but he doesn't angry to me, now He on going his study at college and i missed him.
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 4AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 4
  • Frase 5
    • Fourth is my elder sister, She is good in public speaking ( and i want too ),She has many friends, She likes seafood and now She is on going at college (She likes tourism so She is study about that).
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 5AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 5
  • Frase 6
    • The last is me, I like backpacker , I like to feel new experience, I like to study many language and want to be a polyglot, my hobby is reading comics or novel and I like drawing too, I love cats so much ( Last year I have white grey cat but He is missing until now..His name is Ariel..Oh I really missed him), I loved to gathering with my friends ( my father said that friendship must be endless).
      Vota adesso!
    • AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 6AGGIUNGI una NUOVA CORREZIONE! - Frase 6