Nhờ sửa bài giúp

In the beginning, I would like to start with the separation of all abstractive humanity into two opposite controversial parts and then explore them both to understand their motives and reasons why do they think so.

The first group will consist of those who argue that girls and boys must attend the same school.

The second one is their opponents.

In defense of the first fraction I have to acknowledge that there are a lot of benefits of mixed schools both for children and their parents.

First of all it is early social adaptation that will surely help children in future may be even more than sciences they study.

School life in such conditions is alike regular life outside classrooms.

Thus, boys and girls learn how to communicate with each other.

I argue that they feel their self much more happy without such strict prohibition and feel free.

Looking from other point of view, I clearly see the main reason why people insist that boys and girls must study separately.

Of course, they afraid their children of being suffered from gender discrimination.

And in this way they try to protect their children from communicating with the opposite sex during training.

In addition, there is an opinion that boys, by their nature more mobile and energetic, interfere with their behavior girls from studying.

In the end, summing up the arguments, I must confess that my own opinion is similar to group of people that I have decided to explore first.

Thinking this way I obliged to my experience.

I clearly remember that among my classmates there were many persons whose behavior completely refuted theory that individuality depends firstly on its gender.