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從Pattypa來的文本 - English

  • First Day

  • Hello everybody!!
  • I've just submitted to this lovely site and this is my first letter!!
  • Hope not to make too many mistakes!!
  • I'm arguing with the automatic corrector of my iPad and maybe some mistakes are due to that!!
  • I would like to emprove my english, but most of all, to get in touch with people from all over the world....it would be an interesting experience!!! Bye bye! Patty

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