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Hello, all!
Hello, my new friends.
I'm 20, but I don't speak english well(.
I want to speak with you, and teach language.

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- Hello, all!
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句子 1
- Hello, my new friends.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 1
句子 2
- I'm 20, but I don't speak english well(.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 2
句子 3
- I want to speak with you, and teach language.
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- 增加一條新的校正! - 句子 3