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  • Composition

  • People often claim that women should do specific jobs and men others different.
  • Personally, women should be considered and treated in the same way as men.
  • Therefore everything should be equal, even the military service.
  • Firstly, the state is forced to let every citizen realize his aspirations.
  • So if a woman's dream is to become a militar, she should be free to do it.
  • Moreove, it is well known that women have more strenght and resistence to take decisions, as the Queen of the United Kingdom and the german Prime Minister are.
  • They perform public offices commonly considered prerogative of men.
  • It is popularly believed that women's nature is less strong than that of men.
  • It could be true, because women do not do jobs that require more physical exercise and intensity, such as electrician or mason.
  • What is more, many people believe that women should be dedicated to the family and they should spend their life growing up the children.
  • This is the reason why they could not do such demanding jobs, like the militar carreer.
  • All in all, a society can be considered developed if it let ita citizens be free to do everything and have the same rights for men and women.

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