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  • A recent study of a famous italian institute of research has shown that the way of thinking and the ideals of young people are changing from the ones their grandparents had.
  • On the one hand, our society is in continuous changement, due to social amd economic discoveries that have made our life easier than it was in the past.
  • In adition to this, the free access to internet has let many people improve their knowledges and reach a higher level of education, that old people often do not obtain because they can not use new technologies.
  • On the other hand, the developing number of informatic courses has given old people the possibility to learn how to use a computer and internet.
  • Furthermore, the lifestyle improvement has made old people appear younger, stronger and more active than their young antagonists today are.
  • All in all, everyone will always have something to learn from other people, whatever their age or their social condition is.
  • This is the reason why the generation gap maybe does not exist.

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    • A recent study of a famous italian institute of research has shown that the way of thinking and the ideals of young people are changing from the ones their grandparents had.
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    • On the one hand, our society is in continuous changement, due to social amd economic discoveries that have made our life easier than it was in the past.
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    • In adition to this, the free access to internet has let many people improve their knowledges and reach a higher level of education, that old people often do not obtain because they can not use new technologies.
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    • On the other hand, the developing number of informatic courses has given old people the possibility to learn how to use a computer and internet.
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    • Furthermore, the lifestyle improvement has made old people appear younger, stronger and more active than their young antagonists today are.
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    • All in all, everyone will always have something to learn from other people, whatever their age or their social condition is.
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