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  • Cover letter

  • Subject: Application for an internship in Bank department Dear John Smith: I heard about your needs of interns for a period of 6 month in the Bank Customer Service Representative department.
  • I would be pleased to join your company during this period because I am interested to develop my knowledge among this job.
  • Indeed, it will give me a great experience in the professional world.
  • Moreover, I already worked in a bank company during three years, so I assimilated the basic skills of this profession.
  • During those years, I acquired expected skills of customer services manager.
  • First of all, the capacity to listen to our customer.
  • The ability to pay careful attention to our customer’s needs, which is essential to build a good work relationship.
  • I am motivated, keen, dynamic and I will be glad to work for your company.
  • I would greatly appreciate an opportunity to meet with you, so please do not hesitate to contact me if you have any further questions or if you would like to arrange an interview. Sincerely,

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