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  • I am writing to apply for a 6-month internship as a customer service representative in Barclay’s Limited in London.
  • First, I will explain you what I have done before, demonstrate you why I want to work for your company and finally I will show you why I am a good candidate for this traineeship.
  • As you can see in my enclosed CV, I have always been interested in business, but also in negotiation and human relation.
  • I am able to handle customers’ requirements and inquiries, maintaining a strong and positive company’s reputation.
  • These years of studies have helped me to improve my knowledge in marketing, customer relationship management and corporate communication.
  • My previous experiences in a marketing service and in a bank, have given to me the opportunity to improve my skills to have productive and efficient behavior to resolves customers complaints by understanding the interest of both parts and propound a win-win outcome.
  • I can provide information regarding banking products and services to customers.
  • Do my internship in your bank would be a great opportunity to develop my communication skills.
  • Due to the business framework of studies I have done and the time I spent abroad I speak English and French fluently I also have some bases in Spanish and Norwegian.
  • I am applying to Barclay because it is an expanding firm with a good reputation for employee working conditions and a great CRM service.
  • My organizational skills and my ability to adapt will help me to succeed as a customer service representative in Barclay’s Limited.
  • I would define myself as sociable, dynamic, hardworking, curious, and above all, highly motivated.
  • These competences will help me to succeed in this 6-month internship.
  • I would be grateful if you consider my application for an internship and I would be pleased to give you further information upon your request.
  • I am available every Monday and Wednesday afternoon for an interview.
  • I look forward to hearing from you.

PLEASE, HELP TO CORRECT EACH SENTENCE! - English

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  • Vakya 1
    • I am writing to apply for a 6-month internship as a customer service representative in Barclay’s Limited in London.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 1ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 1
  • Vakya 2
    • First, I will explain you what I have done before, demonstrate you why I want to work for your company and finally I will show you why I am a good candidate for this traineeship.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 2
  • Vakya 3
    • As you can see in my enclosed CV, I have always been interested in business, but also in negotiation and human relation.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 3
  • Vakya 4
    • I am able to handle customers’ requirements and inquiries, maintaining a strong and positive company’s reputation.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 4
  • Vakya 5
    • These years of studies have helped me to improve my knowledge in marketing, customer relationship management and corporate communication.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 5
  • Vakya 6
    • My previous experiences in a marketing service and in a bank, have given to me the opportunity to improve my skills to have productive and efficient behavior to resolves customers complaints by understanding the interest of both parts and propound a win-win outcome.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 6
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  • Vakya 9
    • Due to the business framework of studies I have done and the time I spent abroad I speak English and French fluently I also have some bases in Spanish and Norwegian.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 9ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 9
  • Vakya 10
    • I am applying to Barclay because it is an expanding firm with a good reputation for employee working conditions and a great CRM service.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 10ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 10
  • Vakya 11
    • My organizational skills and my ability to adapt will help me to succeed as a customer service representative in Barclay’s Limited.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 11ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 11
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  • Vakya 14
    • I would be grateful if you consider my application for an internship and I would be pleased to give you further information upon your request.
      Vote now!
    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 14ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - Vakya 14
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