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my job
I am engineer,and my specialization is renewable energies, I hope to be successful in my job.
I wish to develop my career

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- my job
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句子 1
- I am engineer,and my specialization is renewable energies, I hope to be successful in my job.
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句子 2
- I wish to develop my career
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