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  • I don't know what i should write,so after a long time thinking,i decided to write down some sentences that i really love.So it begin~ You helped me when i lost,if it can be achive.I want to take you to see the colorful mountains,the beautiful valleys.This kind of mood,the human how to call it?
  • These sentences comes from my favorite cartoon which called 夏目友人帐,(i don't know how to translate it,so~)this cartoon is very warm,and the characters in this is very gentle.I like it very much,so if you have free time you can go to see see.

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  • câu 1
    • I don't know what i should write,so after a long time thinking,i decided to write down some sentences that i really love.So it begin~ You helped me when i lost,if it can be achive.I want to take you to see the colorful mountains,the beautiful valleys.This kind of mood,the human how to call it?
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  • câu 2
    • These sentences comes from my favorite cartoon which called 夏目友人帐,(i don't know how to translate it,so~)this cartoon is very warm,and the characters in this is very gentle.I like it very much,so if you have free time you can go to see see.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2