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  • Travelling abroad helps to understand your own country.

  • The problem of the impact of travelling abroad on the relation of man on his country has always aroused heated debates.
  • Some people think that thanks to travelling in other countries we can understand your own country, whileothers claim that it can lead to the disappointment in our mother land.
  • In my opinion, travelling abroad can be useful for understanding your own country.
  • Firstly, discovering the cultures of other countries and comparing them with our culture, we can find the features of our own traditions and customs.
  • Secondly, we know about economics and politics of other states by travelling abroad.
  • It can help us to understand the politics of our own country.
  • Thanks to this, we start to understand the action of our government and politicians.
  • However, some people claim that travelling abroadcan lead to the disappointment in our country.
  • In their view, seeing economic and political situations of other countries, people can start to think that the living conditions in their country is worse than in others.
  • Personally, I do not agree with the above opinion.
  • I am convinced that every country has advantages of her living conditions.
  • In conclusion, I believe that travelling in other countries gives people the opportunities for not only understanding their own country but for intellectual growth too.
  • So, I think that everybody should travel abroad.

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