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one day, in small house. lived a cat. her name is Lucy.
Lucy like slept on evening and played on night.
I don't know why that.
I just like it.
In my dream, I had seen Lucy with her newfriend.
I feel sad because Lusy always played with her newfriend. FINISHED

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- one day, in small house. lived a cat. her name is Lucy.
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- Lucy like slept on evening and played on night.
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- I don't know why that.
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- I just like it.
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- In my dream, I had seen Lucy with her newfriend.
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- I feel sad because Lusy always played with her newfriend. FINISHED
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