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Văn bản từ Chorypia - English

  • how has education changed in your country over the last 50 year

  • The education in my country has changed a lot.
  • Firstly I’m going to explain the change in the schools and hightschool, after of this, I’m going to continue with the deails of the education by the family.
  • Actually is available a education system which is called “LOMCE” however, the Spanish have suffered a lot of education System.
  • The actual governet agrees with te last education law, but the oposition desagrees with this meassure, so it will be changed in a few time.
  • About pupils, the people said that the children’s calification and their preparation was stronger than now as a resul of a way to teach deteroration, but I don’t sure of this.
  • I think that the diference between the way to teach has changed because the way to live has also changed.
  • The number of students has increased, educational requirements are highter, on the other hand, diversification is very important in these days, For these and other reason the pupils’ calification has gone down but actual education is available for everyone of the students that, in my opinión, is the most important.
  • As for education in families, I think that it has changed a lot.
  • The children believe that they are adults with fifteen years.
  • It is very dangerous.
  • They practice sex, drink, smoke and consumes drugs very young.
  • However, I think that this problema is guilt of the society and TV programmes.
  • Most of time that a teenager drink, his father dont know nothing.

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    • Firstly I’m going to explain the change in the schools and hightschool, after of this, I’m going to continue with the deails of the education by the family.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 2
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    • Actually is available a education system which is called “LOMCE” however, the Spanish have suffered a lot of education System.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 3
  • câu 4
    • The actual governet agrees with te last education law, but the oposition desagrees with this meassure, so it will be changed in a few time.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 4
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    • About pupils, the people said that the children’s calification and their preparation was stronger than now as a resul of a way to teach deteroration, but I don’t sure of this.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 5
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    • I think that the diference between the way to teach has changed because the way to live has also changed.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 6
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    • The number of students has increased, educational requirements are highter, on the other hand, diversification is very important in these days, For these and other reason the pupils’ calification has gone down but actual education is available for everyone of the students that, in my opinión, is the most important.
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    • ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7ADD a NEW CORRECTION! - câu 7
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